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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-v6ops-siit-eam-01

Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net> Thu, 15 October 2015 09:39 UTC

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Even better. Thanks.

On 15 Oct 2015, at 11:26, Tore Anderson <tore@redpill-linpro.com> wrote:

> * Jari Arkko
> 
>>>   When translating a packet between IPv4 and IPv6, an SIIT
>>>   implementation MUST individually translate each IP address it
>>>   encounters in the packet's IP headers (including any IP headers
>>>   contained within ICMP errors) according to Section 3.3, except for
>>>   any address for which Section 4 explicitly states that the EAM
>>>   algorithm MUST NOT be used.
>> 
>> I think this makes sense, and I at least feel this is better text
>> than the original. Thanks.
> 
> Hello Jari,
> 
> My co-author felt the above was a bit too "conjunction-overflowy", so
> we ended up with the following:
> 
>   Unless otherwise specified in Section 4, an SIIT implementation MUST
>   individually translate each IP address it encounters in the packet's
>   IP headers (including any IP headers contained within ICMP errors)
>   according to Section 3.3.
> 
> This is in draft-ietf-v6ops-siit-eam-02. I hope you see this too as an
> improvement over the original?
> 
> Tore

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