[Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-ccamp-flexible-grid-ospf-ext-08

[Pete Resnick <[e-mail]>]

Reviewer: Pete Resnick
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-flexible-grid-ospf-ext-08
Reviewer: Pete Resnick
Review Date: 2017-02-10
IETF LC End Date: 2017-01-31
IESG Telechat date: 2017-02-16

Summary: Ready with Nits

A couple of nits that I mentioned in my earlier review that you might
want to address, but none of them are essential. (You may have decided
that I was wrong; that's OK too.) I didn't bother Cc'ing the IETF list
on this, since they're both very minor.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments: 

3.1:

   A set of non-overlapping available frequency ranges MUST be 
   disseminated in order to allow efficient resource management of 
   flexi-grid DWDM links and RSA procedures which are described in 
   Section 4.8 of [RFC7698]. 

Those MUSTs look weird to me. I think instead of "MUST be" you mean
"are", since it doesn't look like an implementation really has a
choice here.

3.2:

   Hence, in order to support all possible applications and 
   implementations the following information should be advertised for
   a flexi-grid DWDM link:
   
Is that "should" in there meant to be normative? That is, do bad
things happen if I don't advertise one of those items? Or do you just
mean "the following information is advertised..."?