[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-avt-topologies-06.txt
Suresh Krishnan <suresh.krishnan@ericsson.com> Mon, 22 October 2007 23:15 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-avt-topologies-06.txt
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for draft-ietf-avt-topologies-06.txt For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Summary: This draft is very well written, an enjoyable read and is almost ready for publication except for a minor comment. Minor ===== ASM is a term commonly used in multicast to mean Any Source Multicast (as opposed to Source Specific Multicast). The glossary of this draft redefines this to be "Asynchronous Multicast". Is this just a typo? Because from my reading of the draft all instances of this acronym actually use it in the context of Any Source Multicast. If it is just a typo it can be fixed with just an RFC-Editor note. Cheers Suresh _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-avt-topolo… Suresh Krishnan
- [Gen-art] Re: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-avt-to… Magnus Westerlund