[Gen-art] Re: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-avt-topologies-06.txt

Magnus Westerlund <magnus.westerlund@ericsson.com> Tue, 23 October 2007 07:16 UTC

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Subject: [Gen-art] Re: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-avt-topologies-06.txt
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Yes, it is a typo.

Magnus

Suresh Krishnan skrev:
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for
> draft-ietf-avt-topologies-06.txt
> 
> For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
> <http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html>.
> 
> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
> you may receive.
> 
> Summary: This draft is very well written, an enjoyable read and is
> almost ready for publication except for a minor comment.
> 
> Minor
> =====
> 
> ASM is a term commonly used in multicast to mean Any Source Multicast
> (as opposed to Source Specific Multicast). The glossary of this draft
> redefines this to be "Asynchronous Multicast". Is this just a typo?
> Because from my reading of the draft all instances of this acronym
> actually use it in the context of Any Source Multicast. If it is just a
> typo it can be fixed with just an RFC-Editor note.
> 
> Cheers
> Suresh
> 
> 


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