[Gen-art] review of draft-miller-media-type-cellml-03.txt

[Francis Dupont <[e-mail]>]

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draft-miller-media-type-cellml-03.txt
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Please resolve these comments along with any other
Last Call comments you may receive.

Summary: ready

Some little comments/suggestions which can be handled in AUTH48:
the case of Format/format is not uniform, I propose Format everywhere
if it is really a part of the name, or Format the first time and format
for further cases, or format.
in 3: mathmatical -> mathematical
As the style is native (i.e,, not American) English I propose in 4 for
Author/Change "shall" in place of "will" in "... itself will not change ."

Regards

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PS: the reference begins by "The CellML Umbrella format" so IMHO format
should be lower case everywhere in the I-D even if the reference has
no uniform use of lower case for "format"...

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