[Gen-art] Re: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-ips-iscsi-nodearch-key-03

[Lars Eggert <[e-mail]>]

Harald,

thanks for the review!

On Dec 7, 2006, at 10:47, Harald Alvestrand wrote:
> 1) I read RFC 3720 section 13.5.2 as saying that publication of  
> extensions as standards-track is allowed, even though the wording  
> is quite convoluted. So the implication of the language in section  
> 5 that it was previously restricted to informational only seems  
> unwarranted.

Actually, the problematic section is 12.22, which reads:

    For IANA registered keys the string following X# must be registered
    with IANA and the use of the key MUST be described by an
    informational RFC.

> 2) It would be good if section 5 of this draft pointed specifically  
> at section 13.5.2 of RFC 3720 as the section to be updated, and  
> provided specific language to be read as "this section is now  
> replaced by".

I agree that explicitly pointing at the problematic text in 12.22 and  
providing an in-place replacement is a good idea.

(Authors, please email me an RFC Editor Note to that effect.)

Lars

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