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Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-sidrops-rpki-rsc-10

Job Snijders <job@fastly.com> Wed, 24 August 2022 12:50 UTC

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From: Job Snijders <job@fastly.com>
Date: Wed, 24 Aug 2022 14:50:30 +0200
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To: Stewart Bryant <stewart.bryant@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-sidrops-rpki-rsc-10
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Dear Stewart,

Thank you for taking the time to review this document.

On Wed, 24 Aug 2022 at 11:18, Stewart Bryant via Datatracker <
noreply@ietf.org> wrote:

> Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
> Review result: Ready
>
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
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> Document: draft-ietf-sidrops-rpki-rsc-10
> Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
> Review Date: 2022-08-24
> IETF LC End Date: 2022-08-24
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
>
> Summary:A well written document ready for publication
>
> Major issues: None
>
> Minor issues: None
>
> Nits/editorial comments: I did spend a bunch of time agonising over
> whether the
> term checklist was used in the normal meaning of the term and in the end
> concluded that it was, but a sentence somewhere setting the reader at ease
> would be useful.



Do you have a specific suggestion?

Kind regards,

Job

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