[Gen-art] gen-art "boilerplate" in review tool? (was: Review of draft-holmberg-dispatch-mcptt-rp-namespace-03)
Fernando Gont <fgont@si6networks.com> Fri, 16 December 2016 22:35 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] gen-art "boilerplate" in review tool? (was: Review of draft-holmberg-dispatch-mcptt-rp-namespace-03)
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Folks, I'm almost sure I saw a discussion of this somewhere, but... anyway: would it be possible to have the review tool automatically insert the gen-art "boiler-plate"? Besides, would it be possible to preview what's going to be sent by email (and e.g., allow for confirmation)? Thanks! Best regards, Fernando -------- Forwarded Message -------- Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Review of draft-holmberg-dispatch-mcptt-rp-namespace-03 Date: Fri, 16 Dec 2016 18:48:59 -0300 From: Fernando Gont <fgont@si6networks.com> To: gen-art@ietf.org CC: ietf@ietf.org, draft-holmberg-dispatch-mcptt-rp-namespace.all@ietf.org Folks, Apologies: wasn't sure whether the tool would insert the "boilerplate", so... here it is: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Here's my review: On 12/16/2016 06:46 PM, Fernando Gont wrote: > Reviewer: Fernando Gont > Review result: Ready with Nits > > ** Technical ** > > * Section 3, pages 3-4: >> Intended algorithm for mcpttq is queuing. >> >> New Warning cde: No. >> >> New SIP response code: No. > > Is this kind of thing really needed/required in the registry? > > > > ** Editorial ** > > * Section 1, page 2: >> The third generation partnership project (3GPP) > > May be you should capitalize these? (i.e., "Third Generation...") > > > * Section 1, page 2: >> In addition to this a commercial PTT >> service for non-professional use (e.g., groups of people on > holiday) > > Please insert a comma after "this". > > > * Section 1, page 3: >> MCPTT data transfer currently under development can >> benefit from a queueing mechanism. > > "data transfer..." protocols? > > > * Section 2, page 3: >> The use of this namespace outside such network is >> undefined. > > s/network/networks/ > > > * Section 5, page 5: >> 5. IANA Considerations >> >> Abiding by the rules established within [RFC4412] and [RFC7134], > this >> is an Informative RFC registering two new namespaces, their >> associated priority-values, and intended algorithms. > > s/registering/creating/ ? > > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > Gen-art@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art > -- Fernando Gont SI6 Networks e-mail: fgont@si6networks.com PGP Fingerprint: 6666 31C6 D484 63B2 8FB1 E3C4 AE25 0D55 1D4E 7492
- [Gen-art] Review of draft-holmberg-dispatch-mcptt… Fernando Gont
- Re: [Gen-art] Review of draft-holmberg-dispatch-m… Fernando Gont
- [Gen-art] gen-art "boilerplate" in review tool? (… Fernando Gont
- Re: [Gen-art] gen-art "boilerplate" in review too… A. Jean Mahoney
- Re: [Gen-art] Review of draft-holmberg-dispatch-m… Jörgen Axell
- Re: [Gen-art] Review of draft-holmberg-dispatch-m… Jari Arkko