[Gen-art] RE: Gen-ART review of draft-schoenw-snmp-ether-01.txt

David and Cullen,

Version 02 is now out. Can you please check that the issue is being
addressed to your satisfaction in the new revision? 

Dan

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Black_David@emc.com [mailto:Black_David@emc.com] 
> Sent: Monday, September 25, 2006 4:22 PM
> To: gen-art@ietf.org; j.schoenwaelder@iu-bremen.de; tony@jeffree.co.uk
> Cc: Black_David@emc.com; Romascanu, Dan (Dan)
> Subject: Gen-ART review of draft-schoenw-snmp-ether-01.txt
> 
> I have been selected as the General Area Review Team 
> (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, 
> please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). 
> 
> Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD 
> before posting a new version of the draft. 
> 
> Document: draft-schoenw-snmp-ether-01.txt
> Reviewer: David L. Black
> Review Date: 25 Sept 2006
> IESG Telechat date: 28 Sept 2006 
> 
> Summary:
> This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits 
> that should be fixed before publication.
> 
> Comments:
> This is a short update to (even shorter) RFC 1089 to define a 
> TC and provide somewhat better explanation of a few things, 
> written by a couple of experts.  The -02 version is in the 
> queue to be posted, but I reviewed the -01 version due to 
> time constraints.
> 
> The -01 version would be ok to publish as-is, but I concur 
> with Cullen Jennings's comment that use of RFC 2119 language 
> is appropriate, and I specifically suggest a couple of 
> "MUST"s in the second paragraph of Section 3.2 to require the 
> use of EtherType hex 814C and use of SNAP with LLC.  I happen 
> to know from history that IEEE is somewhat sensitive about 
> proper EtherType usage.
> 
> IANA needs clarification of what to do about SNMP domain 
> registration - see the IANA comment in the I-D tracker.
> 
> Thanks,
> --David
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