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Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-iana-dscp-registry-05

Spencer Dawkins at IETF <spencerdawkins.ietf@gmail.com> Thu, 24 May 2018 12:44 UTC

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From: Spencer Dawkins at IETF <spencerdawkins.ietf@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 24 May 2018 07:44:29 -0500
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To: Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-iana-dscp-registry-05
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Hi, Christer,

On Wed, May 23, 2018 at 1:41 PM Christer Holmberg <
christer.holmberg@ericsson.com> wrote:

> Reviewer: Christer Holmberg
> Review result: Almost Ready
>
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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> Document: draft-ietf-tsvwg-iana-dscp-registry-05
> Reviewer: Christer Holmberg
> Review Date: 2018-05-23
> IETF LC End Date: 2018-05-25
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
>
> Summary: The document is well written, and almost ready for publication. I
> have
> one minor editorial comment that I'd like the authors to address.
>
> Major issues: None
>
> Minor issues: None
>
> Nits/editorial comments:
>
> The Abstract says:
>
> "This update to RFC2474 changes the IANA assignment method..."
>
> ...and the Introduction says:
>
>  "To allow the IETF to utilise Pool 3 codepoints, this document
>    requests IANA to to manage Pool 3 assignments for DSCP values in Pool
>    3 via the Standards Action policy [RFC8126].  This assignment method
>    requires publication of a Standards Track or Best Current Practice
>    RFC."
>
> I suggest to replace "method" with "policy".
>

I think that's right. https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc8126#section-4 does
call these "assignment policies".

Gorry, if you agree, could you make that change?

Thanks,

Spencer

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