Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-iana-dscp-registry-05
"Gorry (erg)" <gorry@erg.abdn.ac.uk> Thu, 24 May 2018 13:10 UTC
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-iana-dscp-registry-05
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Happy to make this change - thanks for noting this. Gorry > On 24 May 2018, at 13:44, Spencer Dawkins at IETF <spencerdawkins.ietf@gmail.com> wrote: > > Hi, Christer, > >> On Wed, May 23, 2018 at 1:41 PM Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com> wrote: >> Reviewer: Christer Holmberg >> Review result: Almost Ready >> >> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area >> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed >> by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just >> like any other last call comments. >> >> For more information, please see the FAQ at >> >> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. >> >> Document: draft-ietf-tsvwg-iana-dscp-registry-05 >> Reviewer: Christer Holmberg >> Review Date: 2018-05-23 >> IETF LC End Date: 2018-05-25 >> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat >> >> Summary: The document is well written, and almost ready for publication. I have >> one minor editorial comment that I'd like the authors to address. >> >> Major issues: None >> >> Minor issues: None >> >> Nits/editorial comments: >> >> The Abstract says: >> >> "This update to RFC2474 changes the IANA assignment method..." >> >> ...and the Introduction says: >> >> "To allow the IETF to utilise Pool 3 codepoints, this document >> requests IANA to to manage Pool 3 assignments for DSCP values in Pool >> 3 via the Standards Action policy [RFC8126]. This assignment method >> requires publication of a Standards Track or Best Current Practice >> RFC." >> >> I suggest to replace "method" with "policy". > > I think that's right. https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc8126#section-4 does call these "assignment policies". > > Gorry, if you agree, could you make that change? > > Thanks, > > Spencer
- [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-t… Christer Holmberg
- Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… Spencer Dawkins at IETF
- Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… Gorry (erg)