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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Review of draft-ietf-l2vpn-arp-mediation-17

"Shah, Himanshu" <hshah@ciena.com> Mon, 31 October 2011 16:59 UTC

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From: "Shah, Himanshu" <hshah@ciena.com>
To: Pete McCann <mccap@petoni.org>, gen-art@ietf.org, draft-ietf-l2vpn-arp-mediation.all@tools.ietf.org
Date: Mon, 31 Oct 2011 12:59:38 -0400
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Hi Pete -
I have addressed your comments in the next revision.
Thanks,
himanshu



-----Original Message-----
From: Pete McCann [mailto:mccap@petoni.org] 
Sent: Tuesday, September 20, 2011 1:37 PM
To: gen-art@ietf.org; draft-ietf-l2vpn-arp-mediation.all@tools.ietf.org
Subject: Gen-ART Telechat Review of draft-ietf-l2vpn-arp-mediation-17

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
< http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Please wait for direction from your document shepherd
or AD before posting a new version of the draft.

Document: draft-ietf-l2vpn-arp-mediation-17
Reviewer: Peter McCann
Review Date: 2011-09-20
IETF LC End Date:
IESG Telechat date: 2011-09-22

Summary: Ready

Major issues: none

Minor issues:

Section 5.2:
     Since this
     notification does not refer to any particular message the
     Message ID and Message Type fields are set to 0.
There does not appear to be a Message Type field in the PDU.


Nits/editorial comments:

Section 5: suggest replacing the idiom "chicken and egg situation"
with "possible deadlock situation."

Section 5.2: "Section 6. below." SHOULD BE "Section 6 below."

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