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[Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-krb-wg-kdc-model-12

"Joel M. Halpern" <jmh@joelhalpern.com> Thu, 31 May 2012 21:10 UTC

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Subject: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-krb-wg-kdc-model-12
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.

Document: draft-ietf-krb-wg-kdc-model-12
     An information model for Kerberos version 5
Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern
Review Date: 31-May-2012
IETF LC End Date: 12-June-2012
IESG Telechat date: (if known)

Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard.

Major issues: None.

Minor issues:
     ID-Nits reports the uage of "MUST not" isntead of "MUST NOT", and 
it claims this is wrong.

Nits/editorial comments:

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