Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-bess-spbm-evpn-01.txt

Thank you for your review, Francis!

On 28 Sep 2015, at 16:13, Francis Dupont <Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr> wrote:

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> Document: draft-ietf-bess-spbm-evpn-01.txt
> Reviewer: Francis Dupont
> Review Date: 20150925
> IETF LC End Date: 20150924
> IESG Telechat date: 20151001
> 
> Summary: Ready
> 
> Major issues: None
> 
> Minor issues: None
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> - Abstract page 1: my spell checker complains about subtending?
>  (IMHO you should make it happy for the Abstract, i.e., change the
>   Abstract wording (and only the Abstract wording)).
> 
> - ToC page 2 and 6 page 9: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments
> 
> - 3 page 4: Reachabilty -> Reachability
> 
> - 4.1 page 6: may be different -> can be different (or any
>  wording which doesn't use a RFC 2119 keyword even in lower case
>  in an ambiguous way)
> 
> - 4.6 page 8 (twice): SPsourceID -> SPSourceID
>  (note I suppose the correct spelling is SPSourceID, anyway it can't
>   be both SPsourceID and SPSourceID so the document must be fixed)
> 
> - 6 page 9: please insert a blank line before.
> 
> - 9.1 page 10 (twice): spurious breaks in 802.1* references
> 
> - 10 page 11: add USA (BTW it should be formally US (ISO IS 3166
>  2 letters) but the UPU says USA and it is what the first (and
>  only correct) entry has...
> 
> Regards
> 
> Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr
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Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-bess-spbm-evpn-01.txt

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