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From: Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com>
To: Ines Robles <mariainesrobles@googlemail.com>, "gen-art@ietf.org" <gen-art@ietf.org>
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Thank You, Ines!

Regards,

Christer

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Subject: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc8843bis-04

Reviewer: Ines Robles
Review result: Ready

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

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Document: draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc8843bis-04
Reviewer: Ines Robles
Review Date: 2021-08-09
IETF LC End Date: 2021-08-09
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:

The document defines a new Session Description Protocol (SDP) Grouping Framework extension called 'BUNDLE'.

The document obsoletes RFC8843 (published  on Jan 2021) by removing the inconsistency between RFC 8843 and RFC8829.  - The procedures regarding assigning the port value to a bundled "m=" section in an answer and instead use the same port for all bundled "m=" sections; some (initial or subsequent) and a subsequent offer were inconsistent. This specification removes the inconsistency by aligning the port value assignment procedure with the procedure in RFC 8829.-

This specification updates also RFCs 3264, 5888, and 7941.

Major issues:  Not found

Minor issues: Not found

Nits/editorial comments: Not found

Thanks for this document,

Ines

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