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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review for draft-ietf-xmpp-dna-10

Peter Saint-Andre - &yet <peter@andyet.net> Wed, 08 July 2015 14:44 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review for draft-ietf-xmpp-dna-10
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Hi Dan, thanks for reviewing the document!

Peter

On 7/6/15 7:16 AM, Romascanu, Dan (Dan) wrote:
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
> Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
>
> http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq
>
> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
> you may receive.
>
> Document: draft-ietf-xmpp-dna-10
>
> Reviewer: Dan Romascanu
>
> Review Date: 7/6/15
>
> IETF LC End Date: 7/8/15
>
> IESG Telechat date: (if known)
>
> Summary:
>
> Ready
>
> Very well written document – as all XMPP documents. Requires a lot of
> extra reading for the non-expert, including three non-IETF documents but
> these are freely available and all comes together nicely.
>
> Major issues:
>
> None
>
> Minor issues:
>
> None
>
> Nits/editorial comments:
>
> None
>

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