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[Gen-art] Gen-ART review for draft-ietf-xmpp-dna-10

"Romascanu, Dan (Dan)" <dromasca@avaya.com> Mon, 06 July 2015 13:16 UTC

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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at



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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive.



Document: draft-ietf-xmpp-dna-10

Reviewer: Dan Romascanu

Review Date: 7/6/15

IETF LC End Date: 7/8/15

IESG Telechat date: (if known)



Summary:

Ready

Very well written document - as all XMPP documents. Requires a lot of extra reading for the non-expert, including three non-IETF documents but these are freely available and all comes together nicely.

Major issues:

None

Minor issues:

None

Nits/editorial comments:

None

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