Re: [Gen-art] [EXTERNAL] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-segment-routing-ti-lfa-13

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] [EXTERNAL] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-segment-routing-ti-lfa-13
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Roni hi,

Regarding one of your comments "Was there a discussion to have the document as informational or experimental
and not standard track?"
AFAIK multiple interoperable implementations of the draft exist and are successfully deployed in live networks.

To me this means that "Experimental" track is not relevant.

Regards,
Sasha

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Subject: [EXTERNAL] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-segment-routing-ti-lfa-13

Reviewer: Roni Even
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-rtgwg-segment-routing-ti-lfa-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2024-03-02
IETF LC End Date: 2024-03-05
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: the document is ready for publication as a standard track RTC with nits

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
1. Noticed that there is an IPR statement for the individual draft. Why there
is no IPR statement for the WG document?
2. Was there a discussion to have the document as informational or experimental
and not standard track?


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