Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-nfsdirect-07.txt

 In your previous mail you wrote:

   At 11:57 AM 3/21/2008, Francis Dupont wrote:
   >I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
   >reviewer for this draft
   >...
   >Editorial:
   > - 3 page 3, etc: about the case of read/write: operations should get
   >  all uppercase, list only the first letter and other all lowercase.
   >  In term of grammar: nouns are in all uppercase, adjective one uppercase,
   >  verb all lowercase. Applying this:
   >...
   >   4 page 5: "RDMA READs" and "RDMA READ"
   >...

   I have incorporated almost all of your comments, but felt I should
   indicate why I did not take just one in particular. The terms
   "RDMA Read" and "RDMA Write" are used consistently with these
   letter cases throughout RFC5040 and other documents, so it seems
   best to retain their style here. Your observation did lead me to fix
   a couple of other inconsistencies, however!

=> the rule itself does not matter, what is important is to have one
and to apply it consistently (:-)!

   Thanks for the careful review. "Acknowledgment" being spelled
   inconsistently was a particular surprise! :-)

=> in fact IMHO both spellings exist but the RFC Editor decided
for one (and again one had to be chosen and to become the only one
to be used).

Thanks

Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr
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