Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Call review of draft-ietf-6man-predictable-fragment-id-10

Fernando Gont <fgont@si6networks.com> Sat, 17 October 2015 01:41 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Call review of draft-ietf-6man-predictable-fragment-id-10
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Hi, Meral,

Thanks so much for your feedback! Please find my comments in-line...

On 10/16/2015 07:07 PM, Meral Shirazipour wrote:
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> Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Informational RFC.
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[....]>
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> Nits/editorial comments:
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> [Page 7], "that needs to fragmented"--->"that needs to be fragmented"

Will fix this.

Thanks!

Cheers,
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Fernando Gont
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