[Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-ietf-tcpm-ecnsyn-08.txt
Gonzalo Camarillo <Gonzalo.Camarillo@ericsson.com> Wed, 06 May 2009 08:25 UTC
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Hi, I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Draft: draft-ietf-tcpm-ecnsyn-08.txt Reviewer: Gonzalo Camarillo <Gonzalo.Camarillo@ericsson.com> Review Date: 6 May 2009 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an experimental RFC. Comments: In general, abstracts should not contain references. In this document the abstract references RFC 3168. In any case, the way the abstract references it is not particularly confusing. Therefore, the authors may choose to leave it as it is. Some references to RFC 3168 in the text do not actually include any reference in brackets. References to an RFC should be in the form "RFC 3168 [RFC3168] says ...". Thanks, Gonzalo
- [Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-ietf-tcpm-ecnsy… Gonzalo Camarillo
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-ietf-tcpm-e… Sally Floyd