Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of RFC2818

Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> Sat, 09 June 2012 07:35 UTC

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Date: Sat, 09 Jun 2012 08:35:06 +0100
From: Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of RFC2818
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Aaargh. My head hurts.

Thanks Martin. I will update my review.

Regards
   Brian Carpenter

On 2012-06-08 19:25, Martin Thomson wrote:
> On 8 June 2012 00:33, Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> wrote:
>> Please see attached review. I haven't cc'ed the IETF or IESG since
>> my comment is only a process issue, but this can be forwarded as you
>> think fit. If the IESG can see a way round it consistent with RFC 2026,
>> that would be fine by me.
> 
> The "Updates" in RFC 5785 is an error, as noted in an erratum on that document.
>