Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-babel-dtls-05
Dan Romascanu <dromasca@gmail.com> Tue, 25 June 2019 18:41 UTC
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From: Dan Romascanu <dromasca@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 25 Jun 2019 21:40:51 +0300
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To: David Schinazi <dschinazi.ietf@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-babel-dtls-05
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Thanks for the quick reply. See in-line. regards, Dan On Tue, Jun 25, 2019 at 9:29 PM David Schinazi <dschinazi.ietf@gmail.com> wrote: > Hello Dan, and thanks for your review. Comments inline. > > 1. In section 2.1: >> >> > The default port >> for Babel over DTLS is registered with IANA as the "babel-dtls" port >> (UDP port TBD, see Section 4), and the port exchanging unencrypted >> Babel traffic is registered as the "babel" port (UDP port 6696). >> >> A reference would be desirable here. >> > > What reference do you have in mind? This paragraph already has a > reference to Section 4 (IANA Considerations). > the section in the Babel spec that defines the "babel" port (UDP port 6696, see ....) > >> 2. In section 2.4 >> >> > Nodes MUST silently ignore any unprotected >> packet sent over unicast. When parsing an unprotected packet, a node >> MUST silently ignore all TLVs that are not of type Hello. Nodes MUST >> also silently ignore any unprotected Hello with the Unicast flag set. >> >> Is the last sentence necessary? Is this case not covered by the statement >> in >> the first sentence? >> > > The Unicast flag is a bit in the Babel packet. This statement instructs > nodes > to ignore a Hello TLV which was received over multicast but has the > unicast flag set. > Thanks for the clarification. > Thanks, > David > >
- [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-b… Dan Romascanu via Datatracker
- Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… David Schinazi
- Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… Dan Romascanu
- Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… David Schinazi
- Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… Alissa Cooper