Re: [Gen-art] Followup on Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-mext-binding-revocation (was Re: Gen-ART LC and Telechat Review of draft-ietf-mext-binding-revocation-10)

On Oct 2, 2009, at 3:25 PM, Ahmad Muhanna wrote:

>
> Thank you Ben for reviewing and taking the time to go through the
> document once more!
> Agreed; Sorry, I missed that one.
>
> I will make sure it is included in the next revision. I am sure you  
> are
> okay not to spin another revision unless this is the only outstanding
> comment.

Yes, no problem. That one could be done as an editor note (or not at  
all, really--it's pretty minor.)

>
> Thanks again!
>
> Regards,
> Ahmad
>
>
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: Ben Campbell [mailto:ben@nostrum.com]
>> Sent: Friday, October 02, 2009 2:47 PM
>> To: Muhanna, Ahmad (RICH1:2H10)
>> Cc: Khalil, Mohamed (RICH2:2S20); sgundave@cisco.com;
>> kchowdhury@starentnetworks.com; pyegani@juniper.net; General
>> Area Review Team; IETF-Discussion list; Jari Arkko;
>> marcelo@it.uc3m.es; Julien Laganier
>> Subject: Followup on Gen-ART review of
>> draft-ietf-mext-binding-revocation (was Re: Gen-ART LC and
>> Telechat Review of draft-ietf-mext-binding-revocation-10)
>>
>> Hi,
>>
>> This is a followup of my Gen-ART review of
>> draft-ietf-mext-binding- revocation, updated based on
>> revision 13 of that draft.
>>
>> This revision addresses all of my substantive issues, and
>> most of the editorial issues. I had one outstanding minor
>> editorial comment where the author proposed a specific
>> change, but that change did not make it into revision 13 as
>> far as I can tell:
>>
>>>>
>>>> -- Section 11, (InitMINDelayBRIs) (I think I commented on 
>> this, but
>>>> can't find the resolution)
>>>>
>>>> Did you intend for the _default_ to be a range (between .5 and 1
>>>> sec), or did you mean to say the default was 1 second, and it must
>>>> not be configured to less than .5 seconds? I suspect the
>> latter, but
>>>> it's not clear from the text.
>>>
>>> [Ahmad]
>>> Sure, will fix this as follows:
>>>
>>>  Initial Minimum Delay Between BRI messages (InitMINDelayBRIs)
>>>
>>>     This variable specifies the initial delay timeout in seconds
>>>     before the revoking mobility entity retransmits a BRI message.
>>>     The default is 1 second but not to be configured less than 0.5
>>> seconds.
>>
>> Revision 13 still appears to have the old text.
>>
>>
>> Thanks!
>>
>> Ben.
>>
>>
>>
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