Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-teas-interconnected-te-info-exchange-05
Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net> Wed, 18 May 2016 20:46 UTC
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-teas-interconnected-te-info-exchange-05
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Thanks for the review, Brian. I tend to agree with this: On 04 May 2016, at 20:48, Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> wrote: > Hi Deborah, > >> To help the reader, I'd say section 6's and section 7's headers should be more clearly labelled "An Abstraction Solution for Optical Domains and Networks" and for section 7 "Abstraction in the User-to-Network Interface". And these titles will align better with Section 8 "Abstraction in L3VPN...". >> >> Would that help? > > Yes. Basically it needs to be clear that the architecture can be 100% > implemented using current specifications, and that the possible extensions > are not required for this (and are therefore not really part of the core of > the BCP). Jari
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-… Brian E Carpenter
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-i… Adrian Farrel
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-i… Brian E Carpenter
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-i… BRUNGARD, DEBORAH A
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-i… Brian E Carpenter
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-i… Jari Arkko