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Re: [Geopriv] draft-ietf-geopriv-l7-lcp-ps DISCUSS by Dan

"Romascanu, Dan (Dan)" <dromasca@avaya.com> Sun, 12 July 2009 14:52 UTC

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From: "Romascanu, Dan (Dan)" <dromasca@avaya.com>
To: Hannes Tschofenig <Hannes.Tschofenig@gmx.net>
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These changes seem fine, and will allow me clearing the DISCUSS as soon
as the new version is submitted. 

Thank you for addressing my concerns. 

Dan


> -----Original Message-----
> From: Hannes Tschofenig [mailto:Hannes.Tschofenig@gmx.net] 
> Sent: Sunday, July 12, 2009 12:40 PM
> To: Romascanu, Dan (Dan)
> Cc: geopriv@ietf.org
> Subject: draft-ietf-geopriv-l7-lcp-ps DISCUSS by Dan
> 
> Hi Dan, 
> 
> Regarding your DISCUSS:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/idtracker/draft-ietf-geopriv-l7-l
cp-ps/comment/
97878/

[IESG Evaluation DISCUSS]
1. Since this document was written IEEE 802.1AB was approved and
deployed. I suggest the following change in Section 5:

OLD:

Switch/Port Number:

      This identifier is available only in certain networks, such as
      enterprise networks, typically available via proprietary protocols
      like CDP or, in the future, 802.1ab.

NEW:

Ethernet Switch (Bridge)/Port Number:

      This identifier is available only in certain networks, such as
      enterprise networks, typically available via the IEEE 802.1AB
      protocol [xx] or proprietary protocols like the Cisco Discovery
      Protocol (CDP) [yy]

Adding informative references would also be nice for IEEE 802.1AB and
CDP would also be useful.

[xx] IEEE 802.1AB-2005 IEEE Standard for Local and Metropolitan Area
Networks Station and Media Access Control Connectivity Discovery -
http://standards.ieee.org/getieee802/download/802.1AB-2005.pdf

Somebody should be able to provide a reference to CDP.


[hannes] Fixed. 

2. The four requirements in the Security Considerations section deserve
to be written with 2119 capitalized MUST.

[hannes] Fixed. 

Regarding your COMMENT:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/idtracker/draft-ietf-geopriv-l7-lcp-ps/comm
ent/
97879/

There are plenty of acronyms not expanded at the first occurence: USB,
DSL, PPoE, etc.

[hannes] Good point. Fixed. 

A new version can be found here: 
http://www.tschofenig.priv.at/svn/draft-tschofenig-geopriv-l7-lcp-ps/dra
ft-i
etf-geopriv-l7-lcp-ps-10.txt

Ciao
Hannes

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