Re: [Geopriv] draft-ietf-geopriv-l7-lcp-ps COMMENT by Robert

Robert Sparks <rjsparks@nostrum.com> Mon, 13 July 2009 13:59 UTC

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On Jul 12, 2009, at 4:40 AM, Hannes Tschofenig wrote:

> Hi Robert,
>
> Regarding your COMMENT:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/idtracker/draft-ietf-geopriv-l7-lcp-ps/comment/
> 97948/
>
> [IESG Evaluation COMMENT]
> There are some typo/grammar issues with the Note blocks added to the  
> start
> of
> Sections 4 and 5 that need to be corrected before publication.
>
> [hannes] Hopefully fixed now.

Looks good.

RjS

>
> A new version can be found here:
> http://www.tschofenig.priv.at/svn/draft-tschofenig-geopriv-l7-lcp-ps/draft-i
> etf-geopriv-l7-lcp-ps-10.txt
>
> Ciao
> Hannes
>