Re: [Geopriv] AD Review: draft-ietf-geopriv-flow-identity-00

Ray Bellis <Ray.Bellis@nominet.org.uk> Tue, 12 February 2013 21:03 UTC

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On 12 Feb 2013, at 17:56, Martin Thomson <martin.thomson@gmail.com> wrote:

> This is reasonable.  There is a statement deprecating ports at the end
> of Section 3.  At a minimum, that could be moved up.
> 
> Highlighting the limited applicability of port is sufficient, and the
> draft could be more definite on this point.  Moving this to the
> introduction might make this clear.
> 
> """Given the limited applicability of using IP and port for
> identification, the port number elements from Section 3.3 of [RFC6155]
> are deprecated and MUST NOT be used.  Flow identity provides a more
> generally applicable means of identifying devices behind NAT
> devices."""
> 
> Then I think that we can justify the "updates" clause.


Thanks Robert for the comments, and Martin for the suggested text.

I'll incorporate this (or something very similar to it, given that this needs to blend nicely with paragraph 2 of the introduction) and rev the document shortly.

thanks,

Ray