Re: [Geopriv] WGLC :draft-ietf-geopriv-civic-address-recommendations-01.txt

"Thomson, Martin" <Martin.Thomson@andrew.com> Wed, 14 January 2009 05:06 UTC

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I believe that this document is ready to be sent to the IESG.

I'd like to see the IANA registration template more fully documented.  Is there a reference for the format that the IANA is using?

There are a small number of nits, grammatical mistakes and the like that shouldn't prevent progress.  F'rinstance gegenüber is translated as "vis-à-vis", which means nothing to me.  The 'net tells me that "opposite" is a valid alternative translation.

Cheers,
Martin

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