[Geopriv] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC5491 (1888)

RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> Tue, 22 September 2009 05:23 UTC

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Subject: [Geopriv] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC5491 (1888)
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The following errata report has been submitted for RFC5491,
"GEOPRIV Presence Information Data Format Location Object (PIDF-LO) Usage Clarification, Considerations, and Recommendations".

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You may review the report below and at:
http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=5491&eid=1888

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Type: Editorial
Reported by: Martin Thomson <martin.thomson@andrew.com>

Section: 3

Original Text
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The PIDF format provides for an unbounded number of <tuple>,
<device>, and <person> elements.  Each of these elements contains a
single <status> element that may contain more than one <geopriv>
element as a child.  

Corrected Text
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The PIDF format provides for an unbounded number of <tuple>,
<device>, and <person> elements.  Each of these elements may
contain more than one <geopriv> element.  

Notes
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<status> only exists in <tuple> [RFC3863], not <device> or <person> [RFC4479].  The proposed text removes the problem.

I believe that it was only late that someone pointed out that <status> only applied to <tuple>; this sentence obviously got missed in the edit.

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RFC5491 (draft-ietf-geopriv-pdif-lo-profile-14)
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Title               : GEOPRIV Presence Information Data Format Location Object (PIDF-LO) Usage Clarification, Considerations, and Recommendations
Publication Date    : March 2009
Author(s)           : J. Winterbottom, M. Thomson, H. Tschofenig
Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
Source              : Geographic Location/Privacy
Area                : Real-time Applications and Infrastructure
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG