Re: [GROW] I-D Action: draft-ietf-grow-private-ip-sp-cores-01.txt

On 19/04/2012 06:16, Anthony Kirkham wrote:
> All,
> 
> I'm very keen to know if we can progress this draft to WGLC? Comments please?

I like the draft and would like to see it moved to WGLC.  No major
comments, but a couple of nits:

-  weil-shared-transition-space-request is now rfc6598
- the last paragraph in section 5 is sloppily worded.
- section 11, reword "to using private addressing, Such" to be "to using
private addressing; such"
- there are a couple of other incorrect capitalisations and instances of
incorrectly used punctuation marks.

Nick

> Tony K
> 
> 
> On 10/04/12 4:49 PM, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
>> directories. This draft is a work item of the Global Routing Operations
>> Working Group of the IETF.
>>
>>     Title           : Issues with Private IP Addressing in the Internet
>>     Author(s)       : Anthony Kirkham
>>     Filename        : draft-ietf-grow-private-ip-sp-cores-01.txt
>>     Pages           : 15
>>     Date            : 2012-04-09
>>
>>     The purpose of this document is to provide a discussion of the
>>     potential problems of using private, RFC1918, or non-globally-
>>     routable addressing within the core of an SP network.  The discussion
>>     focuses on link addresses and to a small extent loopback addresses.
>>     While many of the issues are well recognised within the ISP
>>     community, there appears to be no document that collectively
>>     describes the issues.
>>
>>
>> A URL for this Internet-Draft is:
>> http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-grow-private-ip-sp-cores-01.txt
>>
>>
>> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
>> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
>>
>> This Internet-Draft can be retrieved at:
>> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-grow-private-ip-sp-cores-01.txt
>>
>>
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