Re: [GROW] I-D Action: draft-ietf-grow-private-ip-sp-cores-01.txt

[t.petch <[e-mail]>]

---- Original Message -----
From: "Anthony Kirkham" <[e-mail]>
To: "Nick Hilliard" <[e-mail]>
Cc: <[e-mail]>
Sent: Wednesday, April 25, 2012 3:38 AM

> Thanks Nick, I have incorporated all that feedback. I re-read it and
> fixed a few other instances of poor capitalisation. If there are any
> other nits, please let me know.
>
> The only other issue I can see is an erroneous index which gets created
> by the XML conversion tool. If anyone has any thoughts on how to change
> or remove it, I'd appreciate the advice.

Tony

The index is generated because you have an  <iref ... /> XML element in your
source.  Perhaps <xref... or <eref... was meant (see
http://xml.resource.org/authoring/draft-mrose-writing-rfcs.html
for more information).

That is the easy part.

Getting the I-D to progress, now that is a real challenge, as the recent posts
of Ron Bonica to the GROW list may suggest.

The next step, assuming you see no scope for improvement (and I would leave the
<iref... for the time being), is to ask the Chairs to initiate a Last Call.
There is an e-mail address for the chairs of a WG, which persists as and when
the individuals appointed to the office change, and I have added that to this
reply.

Tom Petch

>
> Tony K
>
>
>
> On 23/04/12 8:05 AM, Nick Hilliard wrote:
> > On 19/04/2012 06:16, Anthony Kirkham wrote:
> >> All,
> >>
> >> I'm very keen to know if we can progress this draft to WGLC? Comments
please?
> > I like the draft and would like to see it moved to WGLC.  No major
> > comments, but a couple of nits:
> >
> > -  weil-shared-transition-space-request is now rfc6598
> > - the last paragraph in section 5 is sloppily worded.
> > - section 11, reword "to using private addressing, Such" to be "to using
> > private addressing; such"
> > - there are a couple of other incorrect capitalisations and instances of
> > incorrectly used punctuation marks.
> >
> > Nick
> >
> >> Tony K
> >>
> >>
> >> On 10/04/12 4:49 PM, [e-mail] wrote:
> >>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> >>> directories. This draft is a work item of the Global Routing Operations
> >>> Working Group of the IETF.
> >>>
> >>>      Title           : Issues with Private IP Addressing in the Internet
> >>>      Author(s)       : Anthony Kirkham
> >>>      Filename        : draft-ietf-grow-private-ip-sp-cores-01.txt
> >>>      Pages           : 15
> >>>      Date            : 2012-04-09
> >>>
> >>>      The purpose of this document is to provide a discussion of the
> >>>      potential problems of using private, RFC1918, or non-globally-
> >>>      routable addressing within the core of an SP network.  The discussion
> >>>      focuses on link addresses and to a small extent loopback addresses.
> >>>      While many of the issues are well recognised within the ISP
> >>>      community, there appears to be no document that collectively
> >>>      describes the issues.
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> A URL for this Internet-Draft is:
> >>>
http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-grow-private-ip-sp-cores-01.txt
> >>>
> >>>