[homenet] Opsdir telechat review of draft-ietf-homenet-naming-architecture-dhc-options-21

Al Morton via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Thu, 06 October 2022 17:09 UTC

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Subject: [homenet] Opsdir telechat review of draft-ietf-homenet-naming-architecture-dhc-options-21

Reviewer: Al Morton
Review result: Has Nits

In Appendix A, the text says, "In this *section*..."  It's more accurate to
say, "In this *Appendix*..." I tried to explain this in my previous review.
Hopefully this comment is clearer.

There are likely other cases in Appendix B that need the same fix.

[homenet] Opsdir telechat review of draft-ietf-ho… Al Morton via Datatracker
Re: [homenet] Opsdir telechat review of draft-iet… Daniel Migault