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Re: [homenet] Opsdir telechat review of draft-ietf-homenet-naming-architecture-dhc-options-21

Daniel Migault <mglt.ietf@gmail.com> Wed, 19 October 2022 00:20 UTC

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From: Daniel Migault <mglt.ietf@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 18 Oct 2022 20:19:58 -0400
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Subject: Re: [homenet] Opsdir telechat review of draft-ietf-homenet-naming-architecture-dhc-options-21
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Thanks Al. That is what we understood and made the change in our local
copy. I expect to publish it today or tomorrow.

Yours,
Daniel

On Thu, Oct 6, 2022 at 1:09 PM Al Morton via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org>
wrote:

> Reviewer: Al Morton
> Review result: Has Nits
>
> In Appendix A, the text says, "In this *section*..."  It's more accurate to
> say, "In this *Appendix*..." I tried to explain this in my previous review.
> Hopefully this comment is clearer.
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> There are likely other cases in Appendix B that need the same fix.
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