[homenet] Brian Haberman's Discuss on draft-ietf-homenet-prefix-assignment-07: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

["Brian Haberman" <[e-mail]>]

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DISCUSS:
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Updated position based on feedback from Int-Dir review (Suresh
Krishnan)...

I don't object to the publication of this document, but there are some
issues that need to be remedied.

1. Section 5 provides the considerations for selecting prefixes. However,
those considerations are incomplete. RFC 7421 provides the analysis for
the use of the /64 boundary.  The Homenet Architecture (RFC 7368)
discusses various Homenet-related issues around not getting sufficient
address space to allocate /64 prefixes to links. RFC 6164 discusses the
use of 127-bit prefixes on point-to-point links. Why does this section
not mention any of these considerations when selecting a prefix?

2. I am raising Alvaro's point about the impact of topology changes to a
DISCUSS.  I think there needs to be sufficient discussion in the document
on the impact of topology changes on the prefix assignment algorithm and
the impact of changing prefix assignments on nodes in the network. This
ties in to the point raised by Brian Carpenter on the claim in the
Introduction that this algorithm can be used in "fully autonomic as well
as professionally managed networks". This is especially true when
convergence is described as occurring "eventually".

3. I understand that this document became standalone when the HNCP and
DNCP documents split. What dependencies/assumptions does this document
have on either one of them?  There appears to be some assumptions on the
Node ID and the flood algorithm.

4. How does the algorithm deal with prefix delegations that have holes
(e.g. RFC6603)? This text seems to preclude such delegations.

5. Section 6 discusses Listener nodes. Does there need to be some
discussion/warning about links that consist of all Listeners?  The link
will not get a prefix assigned to it in such a situation.

6. How does this approach deal with asynchronous link state changes?


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COMMENT:
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* ID-nits complains about the malformed 2119 keywords text in the
Terminology section.  It would be good to use the entire boilerplate for
the 2119 keywords.

* The terminology section claims that the definitions are ordered to
avoid forward reference, but that is not the case. For example, Link
refers to Shared Link and Private Link, Delegated Prefix refers to
Assigned Prefix, etc.

* The definition of Node ID is unclear. What do you mean by "The set of
identifiers MUST be strictly and totally ordered". A node id is a single
identifier, right?