Re: [homenet] Brian Haberman's Discuss on draft-ietf-homenet-prefix-assignment-07: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

[Brian Haberman <[e-mail]>]

On 7/8/15 5:25 PM, Pierre Pfister wrote:
> Hello Brian,
> 
> Thanks for the comments.
> 
> See inline for comments and proposals.
> 
> 
>> Le 8 juil. 2015 à 17:34, Brian Haberman <[e-mail]>
>> a écrit :
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>> Brian Haberman has entered the following ballot position for 
>> draft-ietf-homenet-prefix-assignment-07: Discuss
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>> DISCUSS: 
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I don't object to the publication of this document, but there are some
>> issues that need to be remedied.
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>> 1. Section 5 provides the considerations for selecting prefixes.
>> However, those considerations are incomplete. RFC 7421 provides the
>> analysis for the use of the /64 boundary.  The Homenet Architecture
>> (RFC 7368) discusses various Homenet-related issues around not
>> getting sufficient address space to allocate /64 prefixes to links.
>> RFC 6164 discusses the use of 127-bit prefixes on point-to-point
>> links. Why does this section not mention any of these
>> considerations when selecting a prefix?
> 
> As I mentioned as a response to Tim, the prefix assignment algorithm
> hardly speaks of IPv6. You can assign IPv4 prefixes, string prefixes,
> numbers and so on.

So, this isn't just an address prefix assignment algorithm?  I certainly
don't get that from reading the specification given this statement:

"an implementation can make use of IPv4-mapped IPv6 addresses [RFC4291]
in order to manage both IPv4 and IPv6 prefix assignment using a single
prefix space."

> 
> These considerations are, of course, utterly important for homenet,
> and are discussed as such in the context of HNCP, which already
> includes considerations regarding these points.

Will there be some type of profile document coming next that describes
how to apply this general purpose algorithm to the Homenet/HNCP problem
space?  In the enterprise space?

> 
> One of the main reason of separating the algorithm from HNCP was
> specifically to avoid having such rules in a document which specifies
> an algorithm which can be applied in other areas.

*If* we consider this approach just for assigning IP prefixes, there is
still a need for some guidelines on how the prefix pool is divided
amongst the N links connected to a node. If your above recommendation of
using IPv4-mapped IPv6 addresses is adopted, the assignment of those
will differ from other IPv6 prefixes.

> 
>> 
>> 2. I am raising Alvaro's point about the impact of topology changes
>> to a DISCUSS.  I think there needs to be sufficient discussion in
>> the document on the impact of topology changes on the prefix
>> assignment algorithm and the impact of changing prefix assignments
>> on nodes in the network. This ties in to the point raised by Brian
>> Carpenter on the claim in the Introduction that this algorithm can
>> be used in "fully autonomic as well as professionally managed
>> networks". This is especially true when convergence is described as
>> occurring "eventually ».
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> I proposed the following addition as a reply to Alvaro’s concern. 
> Such topology changes may cause renumbering. For instance, when two
> links are joined, each of which being assigned a prefix from a given
> delegated prefix, one of the two prefix is withdrawn.
> 
> Almost any event can cause renumbering, it all depends on the nodes
> and what they are advertising at the point the event occurs.
> 

I think the above misses the point.  This algorithm has some unknown
convergence time bounded by "eventually".  The text says:

"When an Assigned Prefix is applied, it MAY be used (e.g., for host
configuration, routing protocol configuration, prefix delegation)."

When this algorithm does have to renumber, it gates the convergence time
of the routing protocol as well.  So, even when this algorithm marks the
prefix "Assigned" and it gets advertised to a set of hosts, there is no
way to know when the hosts can actually use the prefix successfully
since the infrastructure now has to wait on routing protocol convergence.

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>> 3. I understand that this document became standalone when the HNCP
>> and DNCP documents split. What dependencies/assumptions does this
>> document have on either one of them?  There appears to be some
>> assumptions on the Node ID and the flood algorithm.
>> 
> 
> Indeed. those assumptions are detailed in the applicability statement
> section.

Right.  Those are the ones I saw and pointed out.  However, in
"professionally managed networks", you also have issues with firewalls,
ACLs, DNS, etc.

> 
> But instead of DNCP, the underlying protocols are referred to the
> Flooding mechanism and the node ID assignment mechanism.
> 
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COMMENT:
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* ID-nits complains about the malformed 2119 keywords text in the
>> Terminology section.  It would be good to use the entire
>> boilerplate for the 2119 keywords.
> 
> Are you sure I should include the whole boilerplate even when I am
> clearly not using all the words ?
> 

That is the common practice.

>> 
>> * The terminology section claims that the definitions are ordered
>> to avoid forward reference, but that is not the case. For example,
>> Link refers to Shared Link and Private Link, Delegated Prefix
>> refers to Assigned Prefix, etc.
> 
> Well noticed. ;) For the Links, there is a circular dependency. It is
> better to have ‘Link’ definition before sub-classes.
> 
> For the delegated prefix. Well. I am not sure it would make sense to
> but it all down. It is a fairly important term. Having it among the
> first also makes sense. And I think a reader has a quite good idea of
> what an assigned prefix is at that point. At least good enough to
> understand why the delegated prefix is used as prefix pool for them.
> 
> Also, doesn’t ‘avoid’ has an hidden meaning of ‘best effort’ ?
> 

I am not aware of such a hidden meaning.

I also have some additional points that I will be adding to my ballot.

Regards,
Brian