Re: [hrpc] Fwd: New Version Notification for draft-tenoever-hrpc-political-05.txt
Bob Harold <rharolde@umich.edu> Mon, 18 June 2018 15:50 UTC
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Date: Mon, 18 Jun 2018 11:50:14 -0400
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Subject: Re: [hrpc] Fwd: New Version Notification for draft-tenoever-hrpc-political-05.txt
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On Mon, Jun 18, 2018 at 8:14 AM Niels ten Oever <mail@nielstenoever.net> wrote: > Hi all, > > A new version of draft-political, with a thorough revision of the > structure and some edits. > > I made a clearer differentiation between the mapping of the different > positions on the political nature and outcome of technology and the IETF > standards process. > > There is also a new abstract and a new conclusion which answers the > research question. > > Looking forward to discuss! If there are comments, am happy to make a > new version before IETF102. > > Best, > > Niels > > > -------- Forwarded Message -------- > Subject: New Version Notification for draft-tenoever-hrpc-political-05.txt > Date: Mon, 18 Jun 2018 05:00:25 -0700 > From: internet-drafts@ietf.org > To: Niels ten Oever <mail@nielstenoever.net>, Amelia Andersdotter > <amelia@article19.org> > > > A new version of I-D, draft-tenoever-hrpc-political-05.txt > has been successfully submitted by Niels ten Oever and posted to the > IETF repository. > > Name: draft-tenoever-hrpc-political > Revision: 05 > Title: On the Politics of Standards > Document date: 2018-06-18 > Group: Individual Submission > Pages: 18 > URL: > https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-tenoever-hrpc-political-05.txt > Status: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-tenoever-hrpc-political/ > Htmlized: > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-tenoever-hrpc-political-05 > Htmlized: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-tenoever-hrpc-political > Diff: > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-tenoever-hrpc-political-05 > > Abstract: > The IETF cannot ordain which standards or protocols are to be used on > network, but the standards developing process in the IETF has a > normative effect. Among other things the standardisation work at the > IETF has implications on what is perceived as technologically > possible and useful where networking technologies are being deployed, > and its standards output reflect was is considered by the technical > community as feasible and good practice. Because mediates many > aspects of modern life, and therefore contributes to the ordering of > societies and communities, the consideration of the politics and > (potential) impact of protocols should be part of the standardization > and development process. > Minor nits: Abstract "Because mediates many" Perhaps: "Because it mediates many" 4. Technology and Politics: a literature review "Without judging them on their internal of external consistency they" "of" -> "or" 4.3. All protocols are political sometimes "protocols can possible be predicted, on could at least consider the" "on" -> "one" 4.4. The network has its own logic and values "This means that the network already contains constrains on what can be deployed into it." "constrains" -> "constraints" 7. Conclusion "undispited that standards and protocols are both product of a" "undispited" -> "undisputed" -- Bob Harold
- Re: [hrpc] Fwd: New Version Notification for draf… Bob Harold
- [hrpc] Fwd: New Version Notification for draft-te… Niels ten Oever
- Re: [hrpc] Fwd: New Version Notification for draf… Niels ten Oever