[http-auth] AD review of draft-ietf-httpauth-extension

Kathleen Moriarty <kathleen.moriarty.ietf@gmail.com> Mon, 01 August 2016 02:02 UTC

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Subject: [http-auth] AD review of draft-ietf-httpauth-extension
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Hello,

Thank you for your work on the experimental draft,
draft-ietf-httpauth-extension.  The draft looks very good, I just
would like to pint out one nit:

Nits:
Section 4.2
   The default behavior for clients is implementation-dependent, and it
   may also depending on authentication schemes.
s/depending/depend/

I'm not sure if I will have time to review the other 2 drafts early
this week.  If I can't, is it okay to put this in last call ahead of
the others?  This may mean that this draft is on the IESG telechat in
a little over 2 weeks and the others may be on the following.  Let me
know if they should proceed as a set and I'll put them all on the
telechat a little over 4 weeks from now.

Thank you.
-- 

Best regards,
Kathleen