Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-httpbis-header-structure-18: (with COMMENT)

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Subject: Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-httpbis-header-structure-18: (with COMMENT)
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Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-httpbis-header-structure-18: No Objection

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Thanks for this work.

I support Benjamin's DISCUSS point about case sensitivity especially with
respect to how a consumed dictionary should be used.  It's fine if you want to
say that the rules for key matching are left to the authors of specifications
of future structured fields, but if that's the case, please do say so.

Should Section 3.1 be explicit that lists are ordered?  It does say "array" but
some definitions I found for that term don't explicitly say anything about
order either, just a "collection".

As my colleagues have already done a rather thorough job, all I have left is a
few nits:

Nits:

Section 3.1.2:
* "... key-values pairs ..." -- s/values/value/

Section 3.2:
* First paragraph, two instances of "items" should be capitalized.
* "Note that dictionaries ..." -- capitalize "dictionaries"
* "... Inner List of tokens:" -- capitalize "tokens"
* "A Dictionary with a mix of singular and list values ..." -- capitalize
"list", and maybe "Item" instead of "singular"?