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Re: Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-httpbis-cache-16

Mark Nottingham <mnot@mnot.net> Mon, 07 June 2021 23:29 UTC

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From: Mark Nottingham <mnot@mnot.net>
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Thanks for the review, Al.

> On 7 Jun 2021, at 3:47 am, Al Morton via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
> 
> Reviewer: Al Morton
> Review result: Ready
> 
> Since this review was requested with a very short deadline, it only allows for
> a "surgical" response.
> 
> This draft obsoletes RFC 7234, and Appendix B lists the changes from RFC 7234. 
> Assuming this list is complete and correct, all of the changes appear to
> improve the situation from an operational perspective, so it's good to go.
> 
> Nit:   == Unused Reference: 'RFC7234' is defined on line 1766, but no explicit
> reference was found in the text

I believe it's there because it's mentioned in the context of obsoletion (both in the Abstract and Introduction).

Cheers,


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