Genart last call review of draft-ietf-httpbis-encryption-encoding-08
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From: Pete Resnick <presnick@qti.qualcomm.com>
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Reviewer: Pete Resnick
Review result: Ready
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Document: draft-ietf-httpbis-encryption-encoding-??
Reviewer: Pete Resnick
Review Date: 2017-04-05
IETF LC End Date: 2017-04-06
IESG Telechat date: 2017-04-13
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments: Looks fine from a non-security-expert's
perspective. It is my duty to ask about keyid in section 2.1:
A "keyid" parameter SHOULD be a UTF-8
[RFC3629] encoded string, particularly where the identifier
might
need to appear in a textual form.
I presume that simply means "might need to be rendered" and does not
include "might need to be typed in by someone", correct? The former is
easy; the latter probably requires a bit more text.
- Re: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-httpbis… Martin Thomson
- Genart last call review of draft-ietf-httpbis-enc… Pete Resnick