Re: Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-httpbis-client-hints-14: (with COMMENT)

[Yoav Weiss <[e-mail]>]

Thanks for reviewing, and apologies for the late reply.

I addressed your comments in
https://github.com/httpwg/http-extensions/pull/1220

On Wed, May 20, 2020 at 12:26 AM Erik Kline via Datatracker <
[e-mail]> wrote:

> Erik Kline has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-httpbis-client-hints-14: No Objection
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> COMMENT:
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> [[ nits ]]
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> [ section 1 ]
> * "requires external device" -> "requires an external device"?
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> [ section 2.2 ]
> * "indicate user agents" -> "indicate to user agents"?
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> [ section 3.1 ]
> * s/sh-list/sf-list/g
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> [ section 4.3 ]
> * "we can remove" -> perhaps another wording that doesn't require "we"
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> * "unless the opt-in origin has explicitly delegated permission to another
>   origin": is this delegation mechanism documented somewhere that should
>   be referenced here?
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> * "is challenging and likely" -> "may be challenging or even"
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