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Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org> Fri, 13 May 2022 18:24 UTC

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From: Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org>
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Subject: [I2nsf] IESG feedback on draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model-30
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Hi!

Thank you for all of the edits on draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model which resolved IESG feedback.

I'm going to ask for one more edit which will reverting a change made based on IESG review.  In the -24 /-25 which was reviewed by the IESG, RFC8805 was correctly listed as a normative reference.  IESG feedback suggested that because this was an ISE document, referencing this document normatively was an problem.  After further discussion, in fact, RFC8805 was appropriately called out as a DOWNREF in the IETF LC with no objection from the community, and it is needed to fully explain the semantics of the YANG model.

Please move RFC8805 back to being a normative reference.

I've advanced the document to "Approved-announcement to be sent::Revised I-D Needed".

Again, thanks for all of the work here.
Roman

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