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Re: [I2nsf] IESG feedback on draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model-30

"Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong" <jaehoon.paul@gmail.com> Mon, 16 May 2022 11:46 UTC

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From: "Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong" <jaehoon.paul@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, 16 May 2022 20:45:54 +0900
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To: Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org>
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Subject: Re: [I2nsf] IESG feedback on draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model-30
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Hi Roman,
Thanks for your sincere leading and help on
this I2NSF Capability YANG Data Model Draft.

I sincerely appreciate our I2NSF WG Chairs (Linda & Yoav) and WG members.
This is all our great achievement :-)

Best Regards,
Paul

On Mon, May 16, 2022 at 8:39 PM Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org> wrote:

> Hi Paul!
>
>
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> Thanks for this last update.  I’ve advanced the document for publication.
>
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> Congratulations to you and the document team, and the WG for this work.
> Well done!
>
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>
> Roman
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> *From:* Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong <jaehoon.paul@gmail.com>
> *Sent:* Saturday, May 14, 2022 5:38 AM
> *To:* Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org>
> *Cc:* i2nsf@ietf.org; skku-iotlab-members <
> skku-iotlab-members@googlegroups.com>; Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong <
> jaehoon.paul@gmail.com>
> *Subject:* Re: [I2nsf] IESG feedback on
> draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model-30
>
>
>
> Hi Roman,
> I have reflected your comments on the revision of the I2NSF Capability
> YANG Data Model draft:
>
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model-31#page-72
>
> Thanks.
>
> Best Regards,
> Paul
>
>
>
> On Sat, May 14, 2022 at 3:24 AM Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org> wrote:
>
> Hi!
>
> Thank you for all of the edits on draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model
> which resolved IESG feedback.
>
> I'm going to ask for one more edit which will reverting a change made
> based on IESG review.  In the -24 /-25 which was reviewed by the IESG,
> RFC8805 was correctly listed as a normative reference.  IESG feedback
> suggested that because this was an ISE document, referencing this document
> normatively was an problem.  After further discussion, in fact, RFC8805 was
> appropriately called out as a DOWNREF in the IETF LC with no objection from
> the community, and it is needed to fully explain the semantics of the YANG
> model.
>
> Please move RFC8805 back to being a normative reference.
>
> I've advanced the document to "Approved-announcement to be sent::Revised
> I-D Needed".
>
> Again, thanks for all of the work here.
> Roman
>
>
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