Re: [i2rs] Last Call: <draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology-06.txt> (A YANG Data Model for Fabric Topology in Data Center Networks) to Proposed Standard

["tom p." <[e-mail]>]

I see

description "Number of vni(VXLAN Network Identifier, see [RFC7348])s
that the fabric has";

which looks like XML/HTML style reference in the YANG module, which will
not work as the YANG module must be plain text.

I suggest an introductory section along the lines of

This module imports ...
from ...
and references [RFC7348]

along the lines of
draft-ietf-netmod-rfc7277bis
without which [RFC7348] will be an unused Reference.

Tom Petch

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>
> The IESG has received a request from the Interface to the Routing
System WG
> (i2rs) to consider the following document: - 'A YANG Data Model for
Fabric
> Topology in Data Center Networks'
>   <draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology-06.txt> as Proposed
>   Standard
>
> The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits
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> Abstract
>
>
>    This document defines a YANG data model for fabric topology in Data
>    Center Network.
>
>
>
>
> The file can be obtained via
>
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-
topology/
>
> IESG discussion can be tracked via
>
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-
topology/ballot/
>
>
> No IPR declarations have been submitted directly on this I-D.
>
>
> The document contains these normative downward references.
> See RFC 3967 for additional information:
>     rfc7348: Virtual eXtensible Local Area Network (VXLAN): A
Framework for Overlaying Virtualized Layer 2 Networks over Layer 3
Networks (Informational - Independent Submission Editor stream)
>
>
>