Re: [i2rs] Last Call: <draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology-06.txt> (A YANG Data Model for Fabric Topology in Data Center Networks) to Proposed Standard

["tom p." <[e-mail]>]

----- Original Message -----
From: "Zhuangyan (Yan)" <[e-mail]>
Sent: Tuesday, March 27, 2018 10:30 AM

> Hi Tom,
>
> Thank you very much for your detailed comments.
> We've incorporated your comments into version-08. We also updated
other referred drafts if they are also published in March :)

Yan

Yes, you have addressed my comments

Tom Petch

> Best Regards,
>
> Yan(on behalf of all authors)
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: tom p. [mailto:[e-mail]]
> Sent: Tuesday, March 27, 2018 12:32 AM
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> Subject: Re: Last Call:
<draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology-06.txt> (A YANG Data
Model for Fabric Topology in Data Center Networks) to Proposed Standard
>
> Yan
>
> It resolves my comments but... :-(
>
> there is a line length problem with that description clause "
description "Number of vni(VXLAN Network Identifier defined in RFC
7348)s that the fabric has."; [not sure what e-mail will do with this
but in the I-D, the line length is too long]
>
> draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo is now RFC8345
draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l3-topology-16.txt is now RFC8346
draft-ietf-netmod-rfc7277bis-03.txt is now RFC8344
>
> the Copyright date is 2016
>
> the URL to the licence information should be https not http (sigh)
>
> "Please replace the data in the revision statement with the data of
publication when published."; /data/date/ 2
>
> data model [6020][7950]
> I would expect to see [RFC6020][RFC7950]
>
> uh huh
>
> I am not sure who the AD is now for this work so they probably need
adding to the addressees of any further e-mail.
>
> Tom Petch
>
> ----- Original Message -----
> From: "Zhuangyan (Yan)" <[e-mail]>
> To: "tom p." <[e-mail]>; <[e-mail]>
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> <[e-mail]>;
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> Sent: Monday, March 19, 2018 4:01 AM
>
> > Hi Tom,
> >
> > Thank you for your comments.
> > We changed the words in description statement as you suggested and
> added an introductory section before the module codes in section
"Fabric YANG Module". The draft-ietf-netmod-rfc7277bis is added as well.
> >
> > We think the new version-07 resolved all your comments :) Thank you.
> >
> > Best Regards,
> >
> > Yan (on behalf of all authors)
> >
> >
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: tom p. [mailto:[e-mail]]
> > Sent: Tuesday, March 13, 2018 8:30 PM
> > To: [e-mail]
> > Cc: [e-mail];
> [e-mail];
> [e-mail]; [e-mail]; [e-mail]
> > Subject: Re: Last Call:
> <draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology-06.txt> (A YANG Data
Model for Fabric Topology in Data Center Networks) to Proposed Standard
> >
> > I see
> >
> > description "Number of vni(VXLAN Network Identifier, see [RFC7348])s
> that the fabric has";
> >
> > which looks like XML/HTML style reference in the YANG module, which
> will not work as the YANG module must be plain text.
> >
> > I suggest an introductory section along the lines of
> >
> > This module imports ...
> > from ...
> > and references [RFC7348]
> >
> > along the lines of
> > draft-ietf-netmod-rfc7277bis
> > without which [RFC7348] will be an unused Reference.
> >
> > Tom Petch
> >
> > ----- Original Message -----
> > From: "The IESG" <[e-mail]>
> > To: "IETF-Announce" <[e-mail]>
> > Cc: <[e-mail]>;
> > <[e-mail]>;
> > <[e-mail]>; <[e-mail]>; <[e-mail]>
> > Sent: Friday, March 09, 2018 9:28 PM
> > Subject: Last Call:
> > <draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology-06.txt> (A YANG
Data
> Model for Fabric Topology in Data Center Networks) to Proposed
Standard
> >
> >
> > >
> > > The IESG has received a request from the Interface to the Routing
> > System WG
> > > (i2rs) to consider the following document: - 'A YANG Data Model
for
> > Fabric
> > > Topology in Data Center Networks'
> > >   <draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology-06.txt> as
> Proposed
> > >   Standard
> > >
> > > The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and
> solicits
> > final
> > > comments on this action. Please send substantive comments to the
> > > [e-mail] mailing lists by 2018-04-03. Exceptionally, comments
> may
> > be
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> > beginning of
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> > >
> > > Abstract
> > >
> > >
> > >    This document defines a YANG data model for fabric topology in
> Data
> > >    Center Network.
> > >
> > >
> > >
> > >
> > > The file can be obtained via
> > >
> >
>
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-
> > topology/
> > >
> > > IESG discussion can be tracked via
> > >
> >
>
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-
> > topology/ballot/
> > >
> > >
> > > No IPR declarations have been submitted directly on this I-D.
> > >
> > >
> > > The document contains these normative downward references.
> > > See RFC 3967 for additional information:
> > >     rfc7348: Virtual eXtensible Local Area Network (VXLAN): A
> > Framework for Overlaying Virtualized Layer 2 Networks over Layer 3
> Networks (Informational - Independent Submission Editor stream)
> > >
> > >
> > >
> >
> >
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