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Re: [i2rs] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology-08: (with COMMENT)

"Zhuangyan (Yan)" <zhuangyan.zhuang@huawei.com> Wed, 18 April 2018 09:23 UTC

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From: "Zhuangyan (Yan)" <zhuangyan.zhuang@huawei.com>
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Subject: Re: [i2rs] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology-08: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Ben,

Thanks for the comments. We've fixed them in version-09. 
Best Regards,

Yan (on behalf of co-authors)

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Subject: Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology-08: (with COMMENT)

Ben Campbell has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology-08: No Objection

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I share Ignas's concern about the definition of "fabric". Otherwise, I have a couple of nits:

Abstract: Missing article before "Data Center Network".

§2: Please use the boilerplate from RFC 8174 rather than rolling your own text to constrain the keywords to their all-caps forms.

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