[i2rs] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology-08: (with COMMENT)

[Ben Campbell <[e-mail]>]

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draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology-08: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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I share Ignas's concern about the definition of "fabric". Otherwise, I have a
couple of nits:

Abstract: Missing article before "Data Center Network".

§2: Please use the boilerplate from RFC 8174 rather than rolling your own text
to constrain the keywords to their all-caps forms.