Re: [i2rs] WG LC: draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology-07.txt
Qin Wu <bill.wu@huawei.com> Mon, 19 August 2019 05:04 UTC
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From: Qin Wu <bill.wu@huawei.com>
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Hi, Tom: Thank for your valuable review. See comments inline below. -----邮件原件----- 发件人: i2rs [mailto:i2rs-bounces@ietf.org] 代表 tom petch 发送时间: 2019年8月16日 20:00 收件人: Susan Hares <shares@ndzh.com>; i2rs@ietf.org 抄送: russ@riw.us 主题: Re: [i2rs] WG LC: draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology-07.txt Not ready The text says /*Consider udpating this part to make use of draft-ietf-softwire-iftunnel*/ Well yes, consider it and come to a conclusion otherwise I cannot see how this is ready to advance. [Qin]: Good catch, will fix this. The idea is to align with RFC7224 and reuse iana-interface-type. The YANG module contains many references - good - but they are not in the I-D references; again, not ready to advance. I see 4761 4762 6325 6326 7348 802.1ad 802.1ah 802.1Q [Qin]:Fixed. IANA considerations references RFC7950 - RFC 6020 is better here as all that RFC7950 says is go see RFC6020. [Qin]:Agree, will update based on your suggestion. OLD This version of this YANG module is part of draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topo-07; NEW This version of this YANG module is part of "RFC XXXX: A YANG Data Model for Layer-2 Network Topologies" [Qin]:Fixed. You also have this unsuitable reference twice in the state module [Qin]:Fixed. The state module lacks references for the imports [Qin]:Fixed. The state module description clause seems misleading; it is only the state part of a module when NMDA is not supported. [Qin]:Fixed. Appendix A - is it Normative? The customary convention is the Appendices are not unless stated otherwise and there is no statement here. [Qin]:No, will make this clear. 'An Example' does not use the addresses set aside for documentation [Qin]:Good catch, will use RFC7042 recommended address range. What is the closing date for this Last call? Tom Petch ----- Original Message ----- From: "Susan Hares" <shares@ndzh.com> To: <i2rs@ietf.org> Cc: <russ@riw.us> Sent: Friday, August 09, 2019 4:42 PM > Greetings: > > > > This draft on L2 network topology has been reviewed by the I2RS WG 3 times. > > However, in discussion with the ADs it is deemed appropriate to do one more > > WG LC and include any input from rtgwg or grow. > > > > Please indicate whether you support publication of this document. > > In your comments, please indicate "support" or no "support". > > > > If you feel there issues that need to be resolved, > > Please indicate whether these issues are editorial, > > Yang syntax, or technical content. > > > > It would be helpful to indicate whether you know of > > Network deployments or potential network deployments of this draft. > > > > Cheerily, > > > > Sue Hares > > > > ------------------------------------------------------------------------ -------- > _______________________________________________ > i2rs mailing list > i2rs@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i2rs > _______________________________________________ i2rs mailing list i2rs@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i2rs
- [i2rs] WG LC: draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-top… Susan Hares
- Re: [i2rs] WG LC: draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network… Qin Wu
- Re: [i2rs] WG LC: draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network… Alexander L Clemm
- Re: [i2rs] WG LC: draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network… Dongjie (Jimmy)
- Re: [i2rs] WG LC: draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network… Linda Dunbar
- Re: [i2rs] WG LC: draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network… tom petch
- Re: [i2rs] WG LC: draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network… Qin Wu
- Re: [i2rs] WG LC: draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network… tom petch
- Re: [i2rs] WG LC: draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network… Qin Wu