Re: [i2rs] FW: I-D Action: draft-keyupate-i2rs-bgp-usecases-02.txt

Tom: 

I'm glad to change the citation in the abstract.    On the authors, this was
merge of two drafts. 

Sue  

-----Original Message-----
From: t.petch [mailto:ietfc@btconnect.com] 
Sent: Thursday, June 05, 2014 4:35 AM
To: Susan Hares; i2rs@ietf.org
Cc: 'Keyur Patel (keyupate)'; Hannes Gredler; Russ White; 'Susan Hares';
rex@cisco.com
Subject: Re: [i2rs] FW: I-D Action: draft-keyupate-i2rs-bgp-usecases-02.txt

Sue

Currently you have six authors which is too many for an RFC - someone's
got to go!   For me, this is not just an admin point - when commenting,
I like to have one or two names, no more, as the clear pen holders whom I
can expect to act.  Too often, with so many names, everyone thinks that
someone else will do something and nothing happens, so, in all seriousness,
I oppose adoption until you sort this out amongst yourselves.

Note too that you have a citation in the Abstract, again not allowed - this
can be surprising difficult to get round but get round it you, one or more
thereof, must.

Tom Petch

----- Original Message -----
From: "Susan Hares" <shares@ndzh.com>
To: <i2rs@ietf.org>
Cc: "'Keyur Patel (keyupate)'" <keyupate@cisco.com>; "Hannes Gredler"
<hannes@juniper.net>; "Russ White" <russw@riw.us>; "'Susan Hares'"
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Sent: Wednesday, June 04, 2014 7:49 PM
Subject: [i2rs] FW: I-D Action: draft-keyupate-i2rs-bgp-usecases-02.txt

> Jeff and Ed:
>
> This updated draft has all the changes that Keyur Patel promised and
updates
> to the reference the current i2rs internet drafts.
>
> Would you please do a Working Group adoption call?
>
> Thank you,
> Sue Hares
>
>
> -----Original Message-----
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> internet-drafts@ietf.org
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> Subject: [i2rs] I-D Action: draft-keyupate-i2rs-bgp-usecases-02.txt
>
>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts 
> directories.
>  This draft is a work item of the Interface to the Routing System
Working
> Group of the IETF.
>
>         Title           : Use Cases for an Interface to BGP Protocol
>         Authors         : Keyur Patel
>                           Rex Fernando
>                           Hannes Gredler
>                           Shane Amante
>                           Russ White
>                           Susan Hares
> Filename        : draft-keyupate-i2rs-bgp-usecases-02.txt
> Pages           : 17
> Date            : 2014-06-04
>
> Abstract:
>    A network routing protocol like BGP is typically configured and
>    analyzed through some form of Command Line Interface (CLI) or
>    NETCONF.  These interactions to control BGP and diagnose its
>    operation encompass: configuration of protocol parameters, display
of
>    protocol data, setting of certain protocol state and debugging of
the
>    protocol.
>
>    Interface to the Routing System's (I2RS) Programmatic interfaces,
as
>    defined in draft-ietf-i2rs-architecture, provides an alternate way
to
>    control and diagnose the operation of the BGP protocol.  I2RS may
be
>    used for the configuration, manipulation, analyzing or collecting
the
>    protocol data.  This document describes set of use cases for which
>    I2RS can be used for BGP protocol.  It is intended to provide a
base
>    for the solution draft describing a set of interfaces to the BGP
>    protocol.
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-keyupate-i2rs-bgp-usecases/
>
> There's also a htmlized version available at:
> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-keyupate-i2rs-bgp-usecases-02
>
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-keyupate-i2rs-bgp-usecases-02
>
>
> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of
submission
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